still disappointed;-(
A starlit beautiful evening,
Chairs lay around the table,
Candles awaiting solemnly
Waiting to light up the moment,
All set for a quiet yet enjoyable night,
With a surprise in store for someone,
Here comes the cake and the disappointment begun,
Surprise was not actually a surprise,
Coz the secret was out before it was done.
Even though the party went well,
There was some disappointment, I could tell
A soulful romantic night I had always dreamt,
The night was cool and the breeze was talking,
I had put all my efforts to create that special feeling,
My efforts to bring a smile on his face,
Were lost on him, commended by the rest
But the last words I hear from this special friend were
“It was great but there’s something for which I am disappointed”
And as he turned and said goodbye,
I stood alone and there was silence in the sky.

13 Comments:
Nice... dnt take it 2 heart yaar! bottomline...we had a gr8 time! We knw he's a donkey..cnt help it na!! Chill!
All i can say is your effort to pen down your feelings did turn out special.
megs- thanx fr being thr always..hum kaise hain aur wo kaisa hai yaar...
n yes bas donkey??
dhruv- frankly speaking, i couldnt pen down wat i truely felt..this ws jes d beginning..
u didnt see the millions of stars that stood along with u and thought u were alone... :-))
so the lil angel is dhukhi haan . These things r all part of life yaar [ they say it .. do not believe it :) ] .. but yet one shud just let them off ....
Cheer up .
and nicely written ofcourse.
both u n megha put feelings so beautifully on paper...as u say it was the beginning...waitin for more...
take care
O dukhi aatma! Youve been tagged again...chalo shuru ho jao!
milo yaar dont be stupid.And the fact remains that we enjoyed a lot so plz dont take things to heart and enjoy ur life .
jithu- m sure.. if those stars cld cm down, they wld hav hugged me.
anuj- i knw it wont hav mattered if 'they' or any1 hd said smthing...bt it hurts coz it came frm sm1 who matters.
bt m ok..dnt wry
manjari- dnt think wld like to pen down anything regarding this.
megz- gadhiii...ab wait kar!!ho jayega tag poora.
bhajji- i knw evry1 enjoyed :-)yippee
i'm not sure i can empathise with u completely coz i've'nt gone thro' such a situation but i wonder how any1'd even think of hurtin u wid such words...i mean u're fantastic the way u're milo-dont worry abt anything-tere paas woh nahin aayega to kahaan jayega?i'm sure he'd feel sorry for his actions...
and ur poem's a perfect paradigm of how to put thoughts into words-hats off 2 u!!!
It's really tough to imagine your feelings...but still I can get a feel of it.
If someone really doesn't even deserve it, should we really care???
andy- cant help it..i really care fr my close pals..whthr they desreve it or nt.
cherubic- thanx..he doesnt evn knw he hurt me..bt kya karein bade bade deshon mein.. u knw;-)
frndhip ki hai nibhani to padegi..
hey,look at the bright side-atleast it made u conjure up this wow! of a poem... :)
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