Thursday, December 15, 2005

missing u!!


hi guys!! well my last post inspired me to write this 1...so here it goes...

I believed I owned one of d key to d doors of ur life,
Now m holding the key n I suppose the way is lost,
I promise I will keep it intact till we mend our ways back,
Coz no matter what I have assured u a place in my heart’s rack.

But is it only me who is missing you,
Deep down inside even u know u do…

I can’t believe it, it’s all over,
U said it all n I listened to u,
Please confirm it to me if it’s true,
This was the end, which means we are through.

I don’t know y but m still missing you,
Please end my pain if you can do….


wat to say abt d snap up there... u all can easily make out dat m crazy abt kids...so if u knw sm nice sites on such cute, innocent , small dearies do lemme knw...:-) tc.

26 Comments:

Blogger desperado said...

beautiful....first the snap..its so sweet..and then the thoughts that follow..
some of the lyrics of the song i am hearing right now...dont know if they match yours..but still thought i share them

Wish you were here
I wish you were here
Don't you know the snow is getting colder
And I miss you like hell
And I'm feeling blue

3:10 AM  
Blogger zxcv said...

certainly continuing from where u left in the previous post...
still struggling to get a move on...
but this is wat life is all about... ups and downs, struggle at every stage.
a beautiful take at life in general

3:53 AM  
Blogger Aman said...

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4:32 AM  
Blogger Aman said...

the pics are real cute. as for the emotions ... arnt they too common to talk about in such a commonly way. either the "feelings" or the expression has to be novel. wat's ur take?

4:33 AM  
Blogger cherubic_chipmunk said...

@aman: hey bloke i kinda understand wat u're tryin to say but i don' quite agree wid u...yes,as u say,the emotions r common and wen it is so the words that describe them have to b common too-o'corse the term 'novel'and de concept of 'old wine in a new bottle' sound glamorous but wen u go thro' such mundane emotions as milo has now, the last thing on ur mind will b to describe them in a novel way -i guess shez done de right thing...hats off milo :-)
n for de pics,i completely agree wid u-cute n innocent kids r a joy 2 watch anytime...

5:36 AM  
Blogger Aman said...

milo, plz excuse me for d discussn that we r having at ur space. well cherubic, i am not criticizin milo for the common words. u r correct in sayin that when one feels them, one mite not be emotionally ready to put them in a novel way. this difference in opinion is in the way we 2 look at bloggin. for me, its a way of putting deep thoughts in a very nice way. u mite like it as a way of written thinking. As u like it. my previous remark was a reaction to the post being called beautiful. milo, no malice meant. truly. :)

6:57 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Gr8 poem...but honey, look ahead...or u'll bump ur head!

take care

9:18 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

i was abt to ask where did ya got the snap :) .... nice pic .. and great poem. SO whom r u missin haan ???? ;)

11:04 PM  
Blogger milo said...

dhruv- wat song is it?

zxcv- life's a struggle...these shake-ups make us strong..n thanx.. u likd it..

7:12 AM  
Blogger milo said...

aman - expression is a way to portray ur thoughts, ur feelings, ur take on life....it could be novel, simple, harsh, unusual..in short could b in any form....its jes d way hw n wen u wanna get it across d way u feel lk :-)
but nice to hear fr wat u felt.

7:12 AM  
Blogger milo said...

cherubic- wow!! nice to knw dat i hav sm1 on my side;-)
thanx.. u likd it.. its more dan enough..

aman - y wld i mind? carry on man! this place is meant fr discussions n putting ur views across..

megs - lol... yaar gir gir ke hi insaan bada hota hai...

anuj- dat snap ws thr in my babies collection... n dis mysterious gal wld lik to keep quiet;-)

7:18 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

well lady its a song wish you were here by group Blackmores Night..lead singer is Candice Night

10:13 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

u and ur love for kids...but how do u tolerate them when they cry and their demands...oh my god!!
ok...now dn't get mad at me...i'm only tryin to pester u...

nice pics,but most importantly,i like wat u've written...incredible...keep it up!!!

11:00 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

cute pic! good lines! :)

7:56 AM  
Blogger Aman said...

:-) never disputed that. keep goin.

11:23 PM  
Blogger D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

i'm only tryin to pester u...
...but hold on....just for the record...you don't have to "try" to pester someone...i believe you're quite natural in it!!!!!!!!!!!!

8:06 AM  
Blogger TripleSix said...

@dyer maker...

nice one...atleast everybdy here will thnk twice b4 confrontin me...
showed ur true colors of frndship,by defamin someone u like..
thts wat u kept tellin me..tht u like me, right...hmmmmm
will havta thnk bout it....

10:13 PM  
Blogger anuj said...

Baras beet gaye .... kuch to likho !!

12:37 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

kuch nahin to ... kuch kids ki pic hi paste kar do .. [ u knw its boring na .. u regularly check the page for updates & then u turn up waitin till eternity ] . so take some time .. itna bhi kya padhna ;)
[ PADHAKU ]

12:38 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

U hav been tagged !! see wht u hav to do .

5:03 AM  
Blogger Jithu said...

for kids pics, if u know abt Anne Geddes. http://www.annegeddes.com/ her site was down when i checked a few minutes back...

7:42 AM  
Blogger the Monk said...

yeah, the pic was good...sow as the poem...

5:54 AM  
Blogger Jithu said...

milo, wishing u and ur family a merry christmas and a happy new year!

11:05 PM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

Merry Christmas!

11:08 PM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

you havent updated for sooo long!

anyways.. happy new year!

6:53 AM  
Blogger cherubic_chipmunk said...

happy new year milo...

4:52 AM  

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