come!! hold me...

Come!! Hold Me…
Come let us begin, a journey inwards,
Come let us walk, with the feeling divulged,
Come let us flow, leaving all the stones upturned,
Come let our souls find their own shore.
Let go off the discomfort if there is any,
Let go off the pain that is bothering you honey,
Let go off the moments where we felt heavy,
And let us see off those days, which we can’t tally.
Now hold every moment we share in pleasure,
Hold the air we breathe together,
Hold out the hold you have on me,
Just hold as this is meant to be.

22 Comments:
I wud hav held u, if my hands werent filthy
I wud have held the air, if it wasnt polluted
I cud have held u, if u werent that heavy :D
I wud hav held ur dreams, if it wud be dark forever
ummmm .....
I wud have held the hold, if u werent that oily ( eeeeks )
nd ofcourse i wud have held u, if u wudnt have been that GOL MOL :p
hehehehe ...... boredom can really piss u off sometimes .
but thts quite romantic han . wht did u ate ? :D
gr8 poem buddy .
they jst need to me a lil more frequent. .
tc .
anuj.
i guess i ruined d romanticism :D
Kahan gaya wo? Aa jayega.. Aa jayega.. dont worry.
Nice 20 something poetry!
Arun
At least you can tell someone to hold u...yaha to ye bhi possible nahi hai! :(
Same to same @ Mirage! :/
nice,
there is discomfort as long as we r here,so dont doubt it.
hold tight.....
anuj - i knw khali dimag, shaitaan ka ghar...
neways a nice new dimension of lookin at it.
arun - pehle mil to jaye...
megs n rohit - i wish i cld tell.. but it ws jes a mere wish..
ms - my hold will only form its grip once thr is sm1 to hold bk..;-)
whoa wat a poem!!!u gonna give all those literary genii a run for their money i'm sure...wish i cud write lik dis...newayz i'm sure dat de special som1 will hold ya soon...keep up de good work...chow
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my hold will only form its grip once thr is sm1 to hold bk
ahan .. thts nt rite
There's a song that's inside of ur soul
It's the one that u've tried to write over and over again
will Sing to u the song of the stars
Of the galaxy dancing and laughing
and laughing again
When it feels like ur dreams are soooo far
will Sing to u of the plans that I have for u over again
So just lay ur head back down
And jst lift ur hands And pray
to be alwayz happy & gay [:D]
(stupidly altered version of WALK TO REMEMBER - OST .. still i need to tap my bck .. hav alwyz been gud .. no big deal :D )
just hold on .. ofcourse u can .. its not tht lonely outside .... u hav got loads of ppl arnd u who really care .. so jst catch on to thm .... i mean untill some1 comes on a donkey ( errrrrr HORSE :) ) ..
i wonder if u had tht dream till now .. my treat :( ??
cut some mangoes .. eat thm .. they r gud for health ..
TC .
anuj.
hmmm hmmmm .....
(PS : just want to clarify this has nothing to do with ehm.. )
journey inwards..
a vista,paved with pain and agony..
letting go of pain
letting go of 1s identity..
u cant choose the moment..for the memory 2 cm..
wish we could hold the moment...like sand..the more u desperately tries to close ur palm..the more empty handed u are..
nice expression..and beautiful choice of wrds:)
tc
very nice!
Keshi.
milo is a gurl ... cool
Update!
anuj - no such dreams yet;-) so no treat...
deepak - :-) nm
sebia - thanks fr droppin by...u too tc....
keshi- thanku!!
ravishin - "milo is a gurl - cool"
nw wats that??
rohit - sure...
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nothing yaar .. had to do an assignment on bird flu.. and i was thinking i bored i am.. and how similar the two words sound phonetically...
cherubic- thanks fr d appreciation..it is too difficult to meet sm1's expectations though..bt i hp i will keep up d gud wrk;-)
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