Monday, May 15, 2006

Illusive Illusion


Here I land on a sandful beach,
Take on the steps feeling the water beneath.
Serene yet fervent waves pulling my immersed feet,
Wanting me to soak myself in the ecstatic treat.

I choose to stand still and feel at ease,
Cold water and wishful air drenched me all pleased.
But the ambience changed and the light begun to diminish,
As I opened my eyes the reality was unleashed.

I was actually stranded on a crowded road,
Accompanied by a cheery mask to unburden my load.
Am i living in an illusion? Yes! May be,
Moving loud and clear but faking the numb inside of me…

19 Comments:

Blogger Mr. Maverick said...

Kya bachchon vali poetry likhte rahte ho!! beach, beneath, feet, treat, ease, pleased, diminish, unleased... *sigh*

Now write some adult stuff ;-)

1:35 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Brilliant poem!

**Accompanied by a cheery mask to unburden my load.

so true...we all do that often to hide the pain...

Keshi.

6:50 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Amazing yaar! Ye kab likhi!? Its awesome!

Btw, don't let some people's so called adult expectations bring u down! ;)

Keep it up! Its awesome, sachi!

12:09 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

wow 2 awesome posts
way to go
beach the best place to be in this heat ;)

1:44 AM  
Blogger Mr. Maverick said...

"Ye kab likhi"

When she felt very very... very bored!

3:53 PM  
Blogger anuj said...

wheres my donkey ( errr .. horse yaar ) .. i guess i'll have to make for my treat myself .. so get ready for d nightmare .. :)

faking the numb inside of me…

dnt wry it'll soon be unleashed ... nd thn u will hav nthin to wry abt ;)

ppl have managed to built stadiums( lush green ) in deserts .. so probably i can get some sand out of tht crowded road .. ummm pani .... vo bhi aa hi jayega .. or u can cry as well .. flood to aa hi jayega :D

its nt tht hard actually .... u jst hav to believe ;) .

take care .

11:42 PM  
Anonymous ............ said...

bullshit crap
nothing else came my mind go through your poetry books again

12:26 PM  
Anonymous anuj said...

@ .......

did u had a look in d mirror or wht ??

11:29 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Hey milo, some1 wanted to give u a piece of his mind but was too scared to leave his URL! :P

5:15 AM  
Blogger milo said...

arun - cant help it...

keshi - thanku..

dhruv-beach side ..sigh!! n thanks..

megz and anuj - thanku sweethearts... i knw u will always b thr to fight fr me.. lol

....@ whosoevr u r.. well thanku so much fr nt leavin ur url...else i may hav felt inferior; readin d gr8 stuff u write..

5:28 AM  
Blogger Mr. Maverick said...

Hey '............' (12 dots in all, I believe its censoring some foul word, though i cant guess one having 12 characters)

I liked your comment which says

'Bull shit crap; nothing else came to my mind'. But I think that has nothing to do with this poetry, your mind is anyway filled with 'bullshit crap'. Aint it? :P

Arun

11:17 AM  
Blogger Rohit Talwar said...

MILO! Nice lines! :)

Keshi's right! We all do it sometime or the other.. :|

4:49 AM  
Blogger My ID not me said...

Hey Wake up,
Its not an Illusion - Its reality.
Looks like Goa calling you again. go get a break.
All i can now think of is - the Sea and Ocean after the mighty dip in the Atlantic

5:13 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

"sigh!"
kya yaad aa gaya ;)

8:29 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

someone named Dhruv tells me it's ur bday today..? if so, HAPPY BIRTHDAY Milo!

:)
Keshi.

11:09 PM  
Blogger Muhammad mukarram said...

hi... nice poetry.

its amazin ..... jus like
broken pixels

3:36 PM  
Blogger Muhammad mukarram said...

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will u mind it ???
if so please leav a comment

3:39 PM  
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3:40 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Where did you find it? Interesting read » »

5:06 PM  

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