Illusive Illusion

Here I land on a sandful beach,
Take on the steps feeling the water beneath.
Serene yet fervent waves pulling my immersed feet,
Wanting me to soak myself in the ecstatic treat.
I choose to stand still and feel at ease,
Cold water and wishful air drenched me all pleased.
But the ambience changed and the light begun to diminish,
As I opened my eyes the reality was unleashed.
I was actually stranded on a crowded road,
Accompanied by a cheery mask to unburden my load.
Am i living in an illusion? Yes! May be,
Moving loud and clear but faking the numb inside of me…

19 Comments:
Kya bachchon vali poetry likhte rahte ho!! beach, beneath, feet, treat, ease, pleased, diminish, unleased... *sigh*
Now write some adult stuff ;-)
Brilliant poem!
**Accompanied by a cheery mask to unburden my load.
so true...we all do that often to hide the pain...
Keshi.
Amazing yaar! Ye kab likhi!? Its awesome!
Btw, don't let some people's so called adult expectations bring u down! ;)
Keep it up! Its awesome, sachi!
wow 2 awesome posts
way to go
beach the best place to be in this heat ;)
"Ye kab likhi"
When she felt very very... very bored!
wheres my donkey ( errr .. horse yaar ) .. i guess i'll have to make for my treat myself .. so get ready for d nightmare .. :)
faking the numb inside of me…
dnt wry it'll soon be unleashed ... nd thn u will hav nthin to wry abt ;)
ppl have managed to built stadiums( lush green ) in deserts .. so probably i can get some sand out of tht crowded road .. ummm pani .... vo bhi aa hi jayega .. or u can cry as well .. flood to aa hi jayega :D
its nt tht hard actually .... u jst hav to believe ;) .
take care .
bullshit crap
nothing else came my mind go through your poetry books again
@ .......
did u had a look in d mirror or wht ??
Hey milo, some1 wanted to give u a piece of his mind but was too scared to leave his URL! :P
arun - cant help it...
keshi - thanku..
dhruv-beach side ..sigh!! n thanks..
megz and anuj - thanku sweethearts... i knw u will always b thr to fight fr me.. lol
....@ whosoevr u r.. well thanku so much fr nt leavin ur url...else i may hav felt inferior; readin d gr8 stuff u write..
Hey '............' (12 dots in all, I believe its censoring some foul word, though i cant guess one having 12 characters)
I liked your comment which says
'Bull shit crap; nothing else came to my mind'. But I think that has nothing to do with this poetry, your mind is anyway filled with 'bullshit crap'. Aint it? :P
Arun
MILO! Nice lines! :)
Keshi's right! We all do it sometime or the other.. :|
Hey Wake up,
Its not an Illusion - Its reality.
Looks like Goa calling you again. go get a break.
All i can now think of is - the Sea and Ocean after the mighty dip in the Atlantic
"sigh!"
kya yaad aa gaya ;)
someone named Dhruv tells me it's ur bday today..? if so, HAPPY BIRTHDAY Milo!
:)
Keshi.
hi... nice poetry.
its amazin ..... jus like
broken pixels
welll i 4gt to tell u dt m going to add ur blog into my link's list
will u mind it ???
if so please leav a comment
dts http://travelermagazine.blogspot.com/
Where did you find it? Interesting read » »
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