Saturday, June 24, 2006

intricacy .. or........... call it life...!!

All the unsaid mounting high,
Finding the outlets clogged and dry,
The pressure is playing seesaw within,
And these eyes are not letting the tears go by.


Carrying a heavy heart,
For a reason I cannot unravel.
It’s holding back my movement,
Compelling me to lose my vision.


My mind is working round the clock,
Cracking the code for the tussle within.
I am wandering in search of solace,
And my resilience is also not letting me give up.


Some frozen thoughts remind me,
There is this fraction of mine,
Which seems to be left behind,
But how do I trace it without a single sign.

It seems am all lost…
And this trial is ripping me apart…

16 Comments:

Blogger Mr. Maverick said...

Waah ustaaad waaah!

10:47 AM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Don't let something blunt rip u apart...! Besides wht goes around, comes around. :)

Awesome poem btw!

10:47 AM  
Blogger Kroopa Shah (Kr00pz) said...

Whoa!! What prompted you to write that? Is everything ok?

9:37 AM  
Blogger Ekta said...

*It seems am all lost…
And this trial is ripping me apart…*

Says it all...beautiful post

8:25 PM  
Blogger milo said...

arun - dhanyawaad!!

megz - i jes wish i dnt misss u much;-(

kroops - well u can say an emotional low!!

ekta - :-)

2:09 AM  
Blogger anuj said...

ahem ahem !!

u knw this is a lil funny .. i read u comment in my blog .. nd it said somethng like .. RELAX DUDE .. nd whn i came here .. wht do i see .. aahhhh !!

i dont understand this .. is evrybdy's life pissed off .. i mean no ones happy or wht .. damn world ..

so leave all the tensions aside & try figure out wht u r ? wht exactly u want ? even i have been trying to do this .. nd u knw probably thn certain things wont matter to u at all .. u will take things however they come ..

so just sit back .. relax .. close ur eyes & think ( naaah !! not abt d same stuff .. abt urself ) .

nd get over these emotional lows gal .. ur a strng gal :)

TC .

6:31 AM  
Blogger desperado said...

now i firmly believe that the line above the blog links on my blog is correct
"Allright....Some Write Better Than Me"

fight it..cause much more beautiful things await you...lots of them

take care buddy

3:46 AM  
Blogger johney said...

Beautiful!!

It is so true. When we keep shutting things in for too long, they explode - KA-BOOM

I know it is not always the writer's mind which the poem speaks about.

1:04 PM  
Blogger milo said...

anuj - thanku fr all d support... m absolutely fine.. dng gud.

dhruv- yeah! u r rite.........u too tc..

johney- thanks :-)

1:38 AM  
Blogger goodwill hunting said...

"Some frozen thoughts remind me,
There is this fraction of mine,
Which seems to be left behind,
But how do I trace it without a single sign"

Hmmmm .the problem is grave.. Follow ur instintcs..Use the seventh sense [:)]

10:28 PM  
Blogger Mirage said...

Look I know u miss me and all...bt thts no reason nt to UPDATE!!! >:(

1:31 AM  
Blogger goodwill hunting said...

cheer up gal....Fight fight fight ...come whatever may, carry that smile (in ur budday waala pic) on ur face

1:26 AM  
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