???
Didn’t I care enough?
With all the honesty I had.
Didn’t I hold hands?
When I was asked to.
Didn’t I hold back on tears?
When I was deeply hurt.
Have I not forgiven just enough?
And moved on in life.
Or wasn’t I supposed to give all that?
Just to see those smiles.
Where did I go wrong?
I just fail to understand.
Oh god! Come and embrace my soul now,
Or do you not feel the need somehow?
All this while i haven’t heard from you,
Or may be you also fake your affection like others do?
Now I feel like questioning your existence,
But am I supposed to???
posted by milo @ 3:17 AM
14 Comments:
you can...you should...but i believe not just when u r down
but i liked tht after long time again gud words started flowing :)
feel like quoting des lines by Raa Sahiri...posted dem on my blog also..kinda resonate wid d thoughts of ur writings
manzil na de charaag na de hausalaa to de
tinke kaa hii sahii tu magar aasaraa to de
main ne ye kab kahaa ke mere haq mein ho javaab
lekin Khaamosh kyuunN hai tuu koii faisalaa to de
barason main tere naam pe khaataa rahaa fareb
mere Khudaa kahaan hai tuu apanaa pataa to de
beshak mere nasiib pe rakh apanaa iKhtiyaar
lekin mere nasiib mein kyaa hai bataa to de
awwwwww u ok Milo?
Nice one but I hope no one did this to u.
Keshi.
Wish I was in Delhi. I would have explained you this 'cause-effect-paradox' I read in Einstein's biography. It seems a bit dorky, but once understood, you will realize how practically it can be applied in life to get on with things.
Will call you sometime...
Arun
hmm...don't worry. things will sort themselves out on their own. Relax ok?
take care
At first I was under the impression that you were adressing to a loved one.
But I was entirely wrong. You are adressing you most loved one, God!
But when you get the feeling that God is away, then always remember the story of "Footprints"
This is Milo at her best!!I've always been a silent admirer of your poems, but this was just too good.
May be I feel the same way these days..
Gluck!!
hmmmm.....
it's really sad as to wat happened...but then all u have to do is flush this shit,n go on...
dhruv - beautiful lines.. thanku!!
keshi - yea m fine... dont wry..
arun - hanji... sure.
megz - absolutely!
johney - i do belive in d story of footprints,, jes need them to accompany me fr sm time n nt follow;-)
amod - thanku soo much... i hope i cn write mr of d 'best' stuff..lol
n do tc..
nika - wink;-)
if you find that youve been feeling just the same
Call me now its alright
Its just the end of the world
You need a friend in the world
cause you cant hide
So call and I'll get right back
If your intentions are pure
I'm seeking a friend for the end of the world
now .. tht's wat GOD said .. :)
( stolen lines .. hehe )
i went to a gurdwara lately .. n its really peaceful in thr .. ur heart is a self owned gurdwara .. jst rely on it .. nd u will find peace :)
ya u can alwyz question tht spoilt brat :P
tc gal ;)
another one fr u ( Simon nd Garfunkel )
When youre weary, feeling small,
When tears are in your eyes, I will dry them all;
Im on your side. when times get rough
And friends just cant be found,
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down.
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down.
When youre down and out,
When youre on the street,
When evening falls so hard
I will comfort you.
Ill take your part.
When darkness comes
And pain is all around,
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down.
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will lay me down.
Sail on silvergirl,
Sail on by.
Your time has come to shine.
All your dreams are on their way.
See how they shine.
If you need a friend
Im sailing right behind.
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will ease your mind.
Like a bridge over troubled water
I will ease your mind.
:) .. say Cheeeeeeeez !!
anuj - nice lines .........
n here is ur piece of cheeeeeeeze!
Hi,
I was just doing google search about manali & got 2 see your blog. http://takeawaydreams.blogspot.com/
I have a fascination of travelling in beautiful mountains/hill stations.
I love travelling/exploring the beautiful hill stations.
you can access my blog at www.hillstationsinindia.blogspot.com where i published some cool snaps of hill stations.
I would appreciate if you provide me a link to my blog.
If intrstd mail/comment so that i can link back to you.
Best regards
Sridhar Varma
-A travelling soldier
hey u okk...seems to have hurt! tc and chillax
milo remember that people who may you cry are not the one that really maater. who matter are those you are with you when you need them the most. so just chill and move on in life girl. and i know you deserve much better for youseelves :-)
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