Implicit love
A dark, star lit evening
Benignly calling me for a stroll.
The road laying itself cheerfully
Asking me to flow with the course.
The branches twisting and twirling
And breeze preparing to give those gentle strokes.
Eagerly waiting for our soulful union
I feel tickled walking my way through such roads.
Charismatic are the whispers chanted by those turns
And implicit is the relation that I share with the ferns.
Gratifying is my life with the surrounds I have earned.
And sacred are the moments that touch upon my heart.
A blissful walk in the meadows
Or a silent saunter under the shadows
Infusing a sense of life in me
Leads my way to the eternity.
posted by milo @ 11:11 AM
16 Comments:
Wooooo!
Amazing hai yaar! Ye emotions kaha se jaage aapke andar?? ;) ;)
But seriously, it was beautiful... i was lost in a lovely daydream reading these verses... sighhh!
here's a fresh one for you ..
Kuch is tarah teri palkein
Meri palkon se mila de
Aason tere saare
Meri palkon pe saja de
Tu har ghadi har waqt mere
Saath raha hai
Haan hai yeh jism kabhi duur kabhi paas raha hai
Jo bhi gum hai yeh tere
Unhe tu mere bata de
Kuch is tarah teri palkein
Meri palkon se mila de
Aason tere saare
Meri palkon pe saja de
Mujhko to tere chehre pe
Yeh gum nahi jajjta
Zaaij nahi lagta
Mujhe gum se tera rishta
Sun meri guzarish ise chehre se haata de -2
Kuch is tarah teri palkein
Meri palkon se mila de
Aason tere saare
Meri palkon pe saja de
- Kuch is Tarah frm AATIF .
d poem rendered me almost speechless .. so cudnt find better words ..
enjy d amazing song ..
nd hope d yr ahead is a bash .. free of tears evn if thy spill out of hapiness .. ;)
tc.
my first reaction after reading the post was..wow both best friends are in love ...but den i was told it was inspired :)
one of ur lovely compositions..beautiful words
hope the posts become frequent in d new yr :D
mirage - i ws feelin so very full of life after such a dull/lifeless period.thanks to u too .. u knw y..
muaah..
anuj - lovely song!! n thankuu soo much fr d wishes. same ta ya too..may god blesss u.
dhruv - lol... well i hp nw u clear dat m still waiting to get lucky;-)
beautiful.... this is one word that striked my mind after reading this. This is milo at her best i guess but we need more stuff from you girl..
Happy New Year Milo!
Keshi.
badhiya hai..
nav varsh ki haardik shubhkaamnayen..
that is a fascinatingly beautiful poem. KUDOS!
may every step towards your eternity be loaded with such gems.
Good One!!!
wow...wat a poem...par kuch samjh nahin aaya :-(
radiating joy and happiness, full of life
Update...!!!
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Great post... I appreciate.. :)
nice....as opposed to what i have written,finally,for an update...
good luck!
its so simple...which brings out d true essence...wonderfully displayed feelings...which call out to d reader
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